Ciao a tutti! Hello, everybody! This week, I've been doing a bit of writing. Yay! But that's also meant that I haven't had much time to work on my Thursday Thirteen. Boo!

Luckily, my productivity has provided me with a simple solution to my dilemma. For more information on this week's topic, drop by tomorrow for my Next Big Thing post on this WiP!

So now, I'd like to share with you:

"So? How does he sound? Does he sound cute?"

"You've seen his picture, Dottie. You know he's cute."

"I know, I know – but does he sound cute, too? I mean, you know… What does he sound like?"

Natalie shrugged and fiddled with the stack of books on the counter, lining them up neatly while she pondered her answer. "He sounds… Italian, I guess."

"Mmmmhhh…" Dottie hugged herself, twisting from side to side on the swivel stool where she perched. "So he has the accent and everything?"

Natalie nodded and fought back a yawn as she let her hands fall into her lap, wishing she could just lose herself in the memory of the phone calls the night before. The second call had lasted a little over two hours, ending only when Lorenzo realized he was running late for work. Had it been the weekend, they might have talked even longer.

Might have? It was a sure thing. Neither one of them had wanted to hang up, but no matter how cheap the calls might be, he'd still have a considerable bill to pay if they chatted too long.

She smiled to herself. Remembering Lorenzo's voice made her feel warm all over. At different times throughout the day, she could have sworn she heard him, a soft whispering voice sharing his thoughts on the humdrum, everyday details of her life, from opening the shop in the morning to counting the till. He always sounded interested, genuinely interested, and pleased to be there with her.

For a moment, she wondered if he really would be like that if he visited, and she couldn't help laughing.

"What's so funny? His accent? Is it a funny accent?" Dottie leaned in over the counter and the stool let out an alarming scrick beneath her as it threatened to slide away. She sat up and scooted closer and Natalie leaned toward her, shaking her head.

"No, it was…nice. His voice is really nice, too. I can't describe it, it's just… It makes me feel good."

"That's so romantic."

"Oh, stop it."

Ciao for now!

Ciao a tutti! Hi, everybody! It's been another busy week here at Casa Menozzi, but I've pulled together a Thursday Thirteen list I hope you'll enjoy. Because that's what this one is all about: Enjoying!

So without further ado, please allow me to present to you:

1) "Glad All Over" - the Dave Clark Five
The giddy joy of the British Invasion sound? Yes, please! Thank you!

2) "She's Not There" - The Zombies
I've loved this song since I was a teenager (in the '80s, thank you). I just...do.

3) "You're No Good" - Linda Ronstadt
Her cover of this classic, soulful song is a classic itself.

4) "Where Have All the Cowboys Gone?" - Paula Cole
Bitterness, brokeness, pure despair put to music. A song about what happens when you get what you wanted, but didn't really quite think it through to begin with.

5) "I'll Have to Say I Love You in a Song" - Jim Croce
For everyone who has ever tried to share their feelings with someone they loved, and found simple words inadequate.

6) "Possum Kingdom" - the Toadies
Creepy. Icky. Fascinating.

7) "Buddy Holly" - Weezer
I like the goofiness of it. So sue me.

8) "White Rabbit" - Jefferson Airplane
Another one I've loved since high school (I was a big fan of '60s music during the '80s). Trippy. And it blew my husband's mind to learn this was the same band (moreso that it was the same singer) to record "We Built This City" and "Nothing's Gonna Stop Us Now" nearly twenty years later.

9) "Let's Live for Today" - The Grass Roots
I saw them in concert (supporting the Monkees) in the '80s. They were still darned good, too. I played this song until the tape I'd made broke.

10) "Wonderwall" - Oasis
I'm pretty sure this is the only song by Oasis that I genuinely like. (I was more a Pulp fan, after the whole BritPop thing had concluded. During it, I was more a Blur fan. I still prefer Pulp and Blur - but mostly Pulp. I could do a whole list of favorite Pulp songs.)

11) "Take Me to the Pilot" - Elton John
Rockin' it old school with Reggie.

12) "I Melt With You" - Modern English
My husband had never heard this song before. I amended that as soon as I could.

13) "Runaway" - Del Shannon
Just turn it up and enjoy.

And there you go: for better or worse, 13 Songs I Forgot I Enjoy!












Are any of these on your mixtapes or MP3 players?














Will you put 'em on there now?

















I promised an extra piece of eye candy last week since I didn't share any after my interview with Robb Grindstaff.












So, naturally, I've done my best to follow through.













After all...












As you surely know by now...

















I always do my best to keep my promises.

Ciao for now!

Ciao a tutti! Hello, everybody! This week's Thursday Thirteen is one I've been looking forward to for some time. January 15th saw the publication of the novel Hannah's Voice, written by Robb Grindstaff. This release has been highly anticipated (in my writers circle, especially), and I literally had the date on my calendar so I would remember to snatch it up ASAP.

I purchased the book on Tuesday morning and completed it Tuesday night. It's a truly engaging read, with sharp wit, biting satire and wonderfully John Irving-esque echoes throughout. (I'll be writing a review soon, when I've recovered from the 'flu.)

In the interest of "full disclosure", I'd like to add that Robb and I have been friends since we met on the Harper Collins Authonomy site back in 2008 (how time flies!).

So now, please allow me to present to you:

(1) Tell us a little about yourself.

My career has been as a newspaper editor, publisher, and manager. The newspaper biz has taken my family and me from Phoenix, Arizona, to small towns in North Carolina and Texas, and from seven years in Washington, D.C., to five years in Asia. Born and raised a small-town southern kid, I’m just as comfortable in Tokyo or Tuna, Texas. I now live in a small community in Wisconsin where I manage a daily newspaper. I’ve written fiction most of my life, and the variety of places I’ve lived and visited serve as settings for the characters who invade my head.

I’ve had a dozen short stories published in several print anthologies and magazines, and several of my articles on the craft of writing fiction have appeared in writerly type mags and websites. I’ve been editing book manuscripts, fiction and non-fiction, for about five years.

(2) You shared some of your work on the Harper Collins Authonomy site when you were working on it. Do you think this proved beneficial?

  Posting my work on Authonomy did prove beneficial, but perhaps indirectly, not because of the contest or the editor’s review. Harper Collins didn’t offer me a publishing contract because of it. Ha. This was back when Authonomy first launched, and it was a much smaller group than it later became, and I think it had more camaraderie at the time than it did later when things went a bit overboard. It may be a wonderful site again—I haven’t been there in more than four years.

I met some wonderful writers on the site with whom I am still friends today. Writers would read each other’s works and provide detailed, honest critiques. The feedback was very helpful at that stage of the writing. Hearing from other writers that the story and the character grabbed their attention—that it really was good enough to keep working on—provided a lot of encouragement. My other novel, Carry Me Away, made the editor’s desk as a top five book on Authonomy. The whole experience really pushed me to keep writing Hannah’s Voice and to submit Carry Me Away to agents and publishers.

(3) An advance review of your novel, Hannah's Voice, says: "Robb Grindstaff’s writing is pure, and free of the hyperbole and love for one’s own words that often get in the way of a good story." What was your immediate reaction upon reading that?

I think all writers like to hear positive feedback. It’s kind of a “Yes, it worked the way I intended” reaction when someone gets it and enjoys it. Writing is such an internal, personal process, that to share it at all can be a little frightening. If someone doesn’t like it—and there will always be those who don’t because reading is also an internal, personal process—it’s hard not to take it personally, no matter how much you try to detach and accept the fact that not everyone will love everything you write.

(4) How much of that hyperbole-free writing is conscious effort, and how much is simply your own "voice"?

I’m not sure I can easily separate the two. It takes conscious effort and years of writing to develop your ‘author’s voice.’ But it’s also a product of the author’s personality, the way the writer views the world, the way the writer naturally communicates. I also believe an author’s voice continues to grow and develop and change over time.

And then there’s the character’s voice, which is a different element from the author’s voice. Although the two are inextricably linked, a character doesn’t speak or think or view the world exactly the way I do. Characters tend to show up in my head uninvited. They start talking, I write down what they say. I hear the character’s voice in my head, and I’m just taking dictation. But then I fuss over every single word to make sure that the words on the page will translate that voice accurately from my mind to the reader’s mind. I want the reader to hear the same voice that spoke to me, and that takes a lot of conscious effort—writing, rewriting, revising, editing. Would the character say it this way or that way? Am I getting the exact right words, in the exact right order, so readers will feel what Hannah feels, know what she thinks, see what she sees? Will readers hear Hannah’s voice?


(5) Who (or what) is your favorite character you've written, so far?

Oh, that’s sort of like asking, “Which is your favorite child?” If I don’t love a character, I can’t write the story. Hannah is pretty special to me, of course. I want readers to get to know her the way I know her, and I want readers to remember her long after they’ve forgotten the details of the story. To me, the best books I’ve ever read are those where the characters stick with me for years and years—Holden Caulfield from J.D. Salinger’s Catcher in the Rye, Garp from The World According to Garp, by John Irving, Billy Pilgrim from Kurt Vonnegut’s Slaughterhouse Five.

Carrie Destin from Carry Me Away is a character who invaded my mind and heart and wouldn’t let go. She’s so completely opposite of Hannah in so many ways. Whereas Hannah doesn’t speak, Carrie doesn’t know when to shut up. Hannah doesn’t want to be the center of attention, just wants to be left alone. Carrie demands attention and wants to accomplish her life goals by tomorrow.

Right now, the character from my novel-in-progress, Turning Trixie, absolutely fascinates me. Trixie Burnett keeps revealing layer after layer of depth underneath a simple, uneducated, small-town single mother. I can’t wait to keep writing this story and find out more about this young lady.

I suppose my favorite character is always the one I’m writing now.

(6) What do you feel is your biggest challenge as a writer?

From a career standpoint, getting published—figuring out the topsy-turvy world of book publishing today, deciding on the best route to go, and how to get your work noticed in an overflowing river of books is a huge challenge.

From a writing standpoint, I tend to set challenges for myself that force me out of my comfort zone as a writer. I’m a middle-aged white guy, so what do I do? I write a story with a mixed-race, teenage girl as the main character in Carry Me Away. After I’d finished that, I swore I wouldn’t attempt a female narrator again. So then Hannah shows up. I didn’t just have to write a novel from a six-year-old girl’s perspective, but she’s a first-person narrator who doesn’t speak. How’s that supposed to work? How do I write that? The second half of the book jumps ahead ten years, so now she’s a teenager. I had to figure out how to let her voice and her thought patterns mature from age six to sixteen while keeping her voice consistent as the same person.

But the absolute hardest part of writing anything is to make sure it’s easy to read. To quote Vanessa Wu, the writer is supposed to do all the work so the reader gets all the fun. That doesn’t mean you can’t make readers think, but readers shouldn’t have to try to figure out what you’re trying to say.   

(7)  I know that you're also a professional editor. Do you give any thought to that as you write, or do you write first, edit later?

I do it all wrong. I write, edit what I’ve just written, re-read it and then rewrite it, then edit it again. Eventually I move to chapter two. When that’s done, I re-read and edit chapters one and two until I’ve got them just the way I want them before moving to chapter three. It’s not a process I recommend for any other writers. It’s just how my brain works.

The disadvantage is that it takes me a lot longer to write the first draft. The advantage is that when I finish writing, it’s usually much further along than a first draft. It will still need an outside editor, but it’s a much cleaner, more cohesive draft than if I’d written the whole thing from start to finish non-stop. It enables me to know the characters, the story, every detail, every piece of information. I don’t usually have issues with a character having blue eyes in chapter one and green eyes in chapter thirty-seven.

(8) Where/When do you do your best writing?

Alone. In total silence and isolation. The characters in my head get distracted easily and are jealous of my attention. Writing is not intended to be a public activity or a team sport.

(9) Do you have anything else in the works?

Carry Me Away is undergoing yet another edit, and is planned for publication this summer, also by Evolved Publishing.

I’m still writing Turning Trixie. Trixie, a single mom and the small town’s only prostitute, learns the winning lottery ticket in her purse is about to change her life. Trouble starts when she decides the rest of the town needs changing too.

(10) How do you go about developing your characters, and how much of yourself do you put into them?

As I said earlier, they just show up in my head and tell me their stories, revealing themselves to me as I write. I’m as surprised by characters as I hope readers are. Often, I’m typing away, and the first time I learn something about a character is when I read the words on the screen that I’ve just written.

During the revision and editing phases, I have to make sure that the character I know so well is coming across on the page, in the written words, so that readers will get to know her the same way I do.

(11) Who do you consider your influences in your writing life?

Lots and lots of them. From Mark Twain to Edgar Allan Poe, John Irving to Chuck Palahniuk, Hemingway and F. Scott Fitzgerald and Dave Eggers. My tenth-grade English teacher. My parents.

(12) What inspired you to write in the first place?

Great books and great writers. I wanted to be able to do that too. As a kid, I read all the Mark Twain books and fell in love with his stories. Then my parents bought me the Jack London novels, like White Fang and Call of the Wild. As a morbid, angsty teenager, Poe’s work fascinated me, and then Catcher in the Rye really solidified it for me. I’ve always wanted to write stories and characters that feel as real to readers as these stories and characters did for me.

Also, as a young child, I was prone to telling tall tales. My mom had to explain the difference to me between storytelling and telling stories—between fiction and lying. Dad reinforced that lesson with a slightly firmer approach.

(13) What one lesson have you learned from your experiences in publication that you would like to share with aspiring writers?

Just one? Hmm.

Don’t launch too soon. Keep learning. Writing isn’t easy, no matter how easily that story flies out of your fingertips and onto the page. That’s your first draft. There’s so much to learn about how to write well, how to fully engage readers, and we never stop learning. When you write that first novel, remember that it’s a practice novel. Maybe your first three or four will be practice novels. That’s okay. Get lots of direct, tough, honest feedback from people who will give you the truth about your writing. Study the craft of writing. Read great books by great writers in a variety of styles and genres. Never be satisfied with what you’ve written. You can always make it better, but at some point, it’s time to move on and write the next thing, which will be better than the last thing you’ve written.

So don’t be afraid to launch eventually.

Intrigued yet? Well, you should be! If you'd like to find out more about Robb, or if you want to just jump right in and purchase Hannah's Voice (and I don't blame you if you do), just follow the links below.

Hannah's Voice on Amazon

Hannah's Voice on Smashwords

Robb's publisher, Evolved Publishing

Robb's own website

Robb's author page on Facebook

Robb's also on Twitter

Ciao a tutti! Hello, everybody! You know what? It's that time of year again - time for me to drag out a few more corrections on the grammar front! I keep hoping these posts will become unnecessary, but, alas, they do not.

So this week, I must present to you

2) too, to, two -
too: also
to: from one point to another point in time or space
two: the number 2.

And there you have them: 13 MORE Frequently Misused/Confused Words.





I hope this has proven helpful for some of you.














At the very least, I hope it was mildly entertaining.



















Now I need to take a little break and get on with some writing.






















Feel free to come back from time to time if you need a refresher, of course.





















Or, you know...















Whatever.

Ciao a tutti! Hello, everybody! Welcome back! Now that we're in the New Year, our thoughts are focused firmly on the future (I hope) and all the wonders which await us in the months to come.

As for me, well, I'm trying to get myself back on track after the holidays and refocus my thoughts and work habits on the projects I wish to finish/start/outline this year. So I thought I'd share with you

1) None So Blind - a second novella 'prequel' to Ask Me if I'm Happy. With a little luck, I'll have this out by late spring/early summer.

2) 27 Stages - I've got more revisions on this one, but I'm hoping to get it out in April or May, if not sooner. (The cover here is a work-in-progress -- the team name will be obscured and the jersey manipulated to avoid reflecting any real-life team affiliations.)

3) Milan, NC - a novella inspired by my own, real-life story. This cover is, of course, a work-in-progress. I'm aiming for a summer release for this one as well.

4) A collection of my photos from the Giro d'Italia.

5) A collection of photos of my Italian home, Reggio Emilia.

6) A collection of my photos of various places in Italy.

7) If I have time after taking on all of the projects listed above, I'll likely resume work on a novella/novel I began quite some time ago under the working title Grand Emilia, which is set in Modena.

8) I may also resurrect a pet project of mine, a novel "completed" a decade ago, called A Marginal Life (Well-Lived). It's going to need quite an overhaul, though.

9) I'll be scanning many photos (from my pre-digital-photography period) to add to my photo book projects.

10) I also need to write articles for the Famous Five Plus group I belong to.

11) Barring any scheduling conflicts or changes, I'll be doing an internet radio interview on March 15th with Webbweaver Books. More details to come!

12) I keep dancing around the idea of my novella about the sexually ambiguous lifeguard in Rimini. I'm going to complete it, one day. Maybe this year?

13) And throughout all of this, I'll be seeking opportunities to promote all of my work to date, especially the expanded edition of Ask Me if I'm Happy, since the proceeds from that title go to charities supporting post-earthquake relief efforts here in Emilia-Romagna, Italy.

And there you go: Thirteen Projects I'm Working On (Or Soon Will Be)!


I'm going to be a pretty busy bunny in the months to come, I reckon.




I'm pretty sure that's a good thing, though.







And no matter what, I have to stay focused and keep putting words on the page (whether it's real or virtual)!














And every now and then, I'll rest up to gain energy for my creative pursuits.












Amongst other things.

Ciao for now!